Elevator Pitch No. 3

Over all, the feedback I received from my Elevator Pitch No. 2 was very positive. One of the main suggestions I received was to make sure my pitch stayed around a minute so that I can keep the viewer's attention. I cut down the pitch by 20 seconds this time by combining sentences and not going into too much detail. I also altered my app so that it won't automatically bring you through the 5-step process of calming down as soon as you tap the app. I figured a lot of people may not even need this function and would like to go straight to the other services available. Another critique I received from not my Elevator Pitch No. 2, but from the comments on my Idea Napkin was to add a 24-hour help line in case the 5-step process does not work in calming the user down. I also added games to the app because I think distracting your brain helps tremendously with stress. So, all in all I made changes to the product itself as well as shortened my pitch to hopefully retain the viewer's attention. Thanks everyone!